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The main thing I want to offer my readers from my site is non biased perception! I want my readers to be able to understand what influenced patterns, issues, cultures, separation, and unity in the Unites States . I also want my readers to be able to draw connections between trends that took place back then, compared to how they are now.
Hi Johnese,
ReplyDeletePlease refresh my memory--you decided to go with the essay, and not the fashion exhibit?
If that is correct, please update the home page to your website. The Reconstruction Revision is good, I want you to illustrate it more--add an image with the reconstruction amendments. Add images of black troops who fought for the union, and add one of the black codes. I think you should also explain more what was in the black codes. For the DuBois quote--he is talking about obstacles that keep people from the american dream--enslavement, black codes, and Jim Crow were tremendous obstacles--people worked hard, had hope, succeeded, then had it all taken away.. Freedom--black codes; Political and Economic success--Jim Crow and disenfranchisement. Maybe your second story should be on the Rise of the New South. Do some revising to your first story, and draft the revision of the second one this week; Week 12!
Hi Johnese,
ReplyDeleteYour essay is looking great. For the final product—I think you need to change the title of the Rise of the New South because here you are actually talking about the rise of industrial capitalism. The Rise of the New South is about the Redeemers, Jim Crow Laws, the rape myth, and lynching.
Also, add an introduction to your home page that brings all this together—what is all this evidence saying to you about the “American Dream”?